Talk:Geneva Declaration (1918)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 17:08, 22 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

I will take this review. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:08, 22 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:  
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:  
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:  
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:  
    C. It contains no original research:  
    Will conduct a source spotcheck.
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:  
    Earwig has plagiarism of 18%.
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:  
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):  
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:  
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:  
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

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Image issues

File:Krfska.jpg, File:Portrait of Ante Trumbić.jpg, and File:NikolaPasic--balkancockpitpol00pric 0191.png are missing half of their license.

Source spotcheck (6 random citations checked, don't have access to Janković 1964 which I will AGF on)
  • 1 fine
  • 15 first one yes, second one irrelevant
  • 18 fine
  • 21 both fine
  • 23 fine
  • 70 fine

I will get to this review in the next week. If you have time, please consider reviewing an article at WP:GAN. I will be using this review in the WikiCup. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:08, 22 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for taking time to do this review. I will try to address any concerns regarding the article as quickly as possible. Tomobe03 (talk) 07:36, 23 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Tomobe03, great article! I'll put it on hold while you address the image issues. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:09, 28 February 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! I'm generally away from my computer today and tomorrow, but I expect to address this on Friday (3 March). Cheers--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:40, 1 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

I think I managed to fix all image issues except "Krfska". I hope to get to that one and other issues by tomorrow.--Tomobe03 (talk) 15:41, 4 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

I have removed the "Krfska" image provisionally. I think it is reasonable to assume it was published in early 1920s at the latest (if not in 1917, but I have not managed to find the publication data right now. I intend to restore the image to the article once the information is found. I have removed the irrelevant cite and therefore I think I have addressed all the issues raised in this GAR.--Tomobe03 (talk) 20:12, 5 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

Well done. Promoting now. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:06, 6 March 2023 (UTC)Reply
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