Talk:Genoese occupation of Rhodes/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:43, 1 August 2019 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:43, 1 August 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • No DABs, external links OK
  • Rhodes and its nearby islands had been detached from the control of the central Byzantine government already since before awkward
    • Rephrased the whole section
  • According to the account of George Akropolites comma after the last word
    • Done
  • Put the subtitle of Hazard into title case
    • Done
  • Translate the title of Balletto and add the language identifier
    • Done re the translation, but the language identifier is for the chapter, and that is in English
  • And do the same for both Savvides titles.
    • Done
  • Short and sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:59, 11 August 2019 (UTC)Reply