Talk:George F. Lewis

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 02:35, 9 November 2019 (UTC)

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• ... that George F. Lewis helped set up the printing that reported the news for the first time by telegraph of a Presidential election result? "...aided in putting into type the first news ever received by telegraph of a presidential election"

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Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 12:59, 9 October 2019 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough. Hook checks out and is in article and cited. I don't see any textual issues, either. QPQ present. Good to go. Raymie (t • c) 20:51, 11 October 2019 (UTC)

• @Doug Coldwell: What does "set up the printing" mean? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:10, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

• @Cwmhiraeth: - Citation 3 is Leeson, Michael A. (1881). History of Saginaw County, Mich. page 469 says, and aided in putting into type the first news ever received by telegraph of a presidential election that of Gen Zachary Taylor. Feel free to change the hook if you like. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:05, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

• So the election result had been received by telegraph for the first time (rather than on horseback), and he published the information in his newspaper? Is that correct? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:04, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

• @Cwmhiraeth: - Yes, that is correct! You can change the hook any way you wish and I already automatically approve. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:53, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

• @Doug Coldwell: How about this? He may have just been the typesetter. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:01, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

• ALT1 ... that having received the results of the 1848 presidential election by telegraph for the first time ever, George F. Lewis helped publish the news?

• @Cwmhiraeth: - Yes, ALT1 will work for me. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:12, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

• Replacing the tick. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:30, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:George F. Lewis/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:11, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

Doing this for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 13:11, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• The image caption needs to be expanded from just "1863"

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• The lead is on the short side. Consider expanding it with relevant summarized information from the article body

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Early life and education

• Do we have any information about his parents and what they did?

•  Done -Looked everywhere and nothing mentioned about his parents other than they moved to Mount Clemens.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• Also I cannot see any information about his education despite the section includes the word "education".

•  Done - removed education. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:37, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Business career

• Wikilink Lake Superior on the first mention

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "On his return trip to New York City that fall," - avoid the use of seasons per MOS:SEASON

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "to get copper ore samples." - to obtain samples of copper ore.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "he met Horace Greeley of the New-York Tribune." - what was the meeting about?

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "when took a job in July " - when he took

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "winter of 1848–1849." - 1848 to 1849.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Lewis started the Port Huron Commercial newspaper in 1851[1]" - a comma is missing between "1851" and the citation

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "and then sold it to the Saginaw Enterprise Publishing Company." - and he subsequently

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 08:55, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Personal life

• The final two paragraphs should be merged together to avoid having stubby one-line paragraphs

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• "Lewis died May 30, 1890." - died on May 30

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• Also, please date where Lewis died and what he died from (if the information is available)

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:49, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

• @MWright96: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:03, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

• @Doug Coldwell: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:07, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

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