Talk:German Mission House/GA1

Latest comment: 4 months ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 05:59, 9 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:22, 30 May 2024 (UTC)Reply


I'll take a look at this one over the upcoming weekend. Zawed (talk) 10:22, 30 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Comments as follows:

Infobox

  • Is it possible to alter the scale of the map to show the whole island? Given the obscurity of the Chathams, the present scale, without any other features for reference/context, doesn't seem helpful.

History

  • Maunganui Bluff is red linked here but not in lead
  • following a land feud...: this wording seems strange, "a feud over land" seems a more natural expression. Also, who was he feuding with?
  • There are two different redlinks for Johannes Engst (text/caption), I would go with the one that doesn't use his middle name, doesn't need this level of disambiguation at this stage.

Structure

  • Dangerfield says that there were three bedrooms in the upper storey. May as mention the number as not explicitly stated at the moment.
  • The building is split into three rooms: strictly speaking, isn't it the ground floor that is split into three rooms?
  • 1st column, 2 para of page 16 of Dangerfield touches on the importance attached to the building by the locals. Worth mentioning?

Source checks

  • Spot checks done on cites 2, 3 and 5, these are fine.

Other stuff

  • No dupe links
  • The colour image tags check out although the two B&W photographs need US tags.
  • I noticed it was only placed in one category, I added a couple more that I thought were relevant.

That's it for me. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 11:08, 3 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Zawed: Thank you so much! I think I fixed everything up. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 14:40, 3 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Looks all fine to me. Passing as GA as I believe that this meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:13, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply