Talk:German cruiser Leipzig

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:59, 1 May 2013 (UTC) I'll do this one. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 09:59, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	addressed
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	OK
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	OK
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	OK
	2c. it contains no original research.	OK
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	good coverage
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	OK
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	OK
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	OK
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	OK
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	OK
	7. Overall assessment.	Points addressed

Comments

• Two dablinks need fixing [1]
• "and was scuttled in July 1946"
• "and four of 7-cylinder"
• "by six Mmarine-type"
• needs a space between "12" and "x" in the infobox re: torpedo tubes
• "since the end of World War I. in 1934"
• "the battleship Gneisenau, and cruiser Deutschland"
• " the light cruiser Köln'"
• the "Baltic Sea", "Köln" and "Skagerrak" links are duplicated
  • All of the above should be taken care of. Parsecboy (talk) 14:44, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
• no alt text on images (not required at GA)
• suggest you convert to 13 digit isbn's (not required)
  • In my experience at FAC, the source people there want to keep the original 10-digit isbns for books that were published before 2007. Don't ask me why.
• other toolbox checks all green (no action required)

Great article as usual. Just a couple of points to be addressed then she's fine to be promoted. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:43, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

• • Thanks for reviewing the article, Peacemaker. Parsecboy (talk) 14:44, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
    • No worries. Promoted.