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Good articleGerman destroyer Z13 Erich Koellner has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 16, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that German destroyer Z13 Erich Koellner visibly tilted when hit by the 15-inch (380 mm) semi-armor piercing shells fired by the battleship HMS Warspite during the Second Battle of Narvik on 13 April 1940?

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Latest comment: 13 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hi, this looks pretty good. I have a couple of observations/suggestions as part of my B class review:

  • in the infobox it says "Ordered: 9 January 1935", but in the prose it says "ordered on 10 November 1934";
  • in the Design and description section, you might consider adding a sentence on the size of the complement, given that it is mentioned in the infobox;
  • the final paragraph doesn't seem to state whether or not the ship sunk, but the infobox states that the ship did;
  • "Groener" in the Notes "Gröner" in the References;
  • "Lieutenant Commander (Fregattenkapitän) Schulze-Hinrichs had decided" (this doesn't seem to indicate who Schulza-Hinrichs is or was - I assume he was the ship's captain? If so, it should probably be stated with a small clause, e.g. "Lieutenant Commander (Fregattenkapitän) Schulze-Hinrichs, the ship's captain, had decided"). AustralianRupert (talk) 04:49, 18 May 2011 (UTC)Reply
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