Talk:German destroyer Z23

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:German destroyer Z23/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:19, 6 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:19, 6 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y (9.9% is highest.)
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y
  • No DAB links  Y
  • No Dead links  Y

Prose Suggestions

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  • the threat from Allied aircraft and cruisers attempting to prevent Axis blockade runners from reaching port through the bay. suggest you change this to which were threatened by Allied aircraft and cruisers attempting to prevent Axis blockade runners from reaching port through the bay.
  • Heavy seas flooded her forecastle and she lost four men overboard before returning to Bordeaux. suggest During this mission, heavy seas flooded her forecastle and she lost four men overboard before returning to Bordeaux.
  • @Sturmvogel 66: That is all my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:54, 9 March 2018 (UTC)Reply