Talk:German destroyer Z29

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:39, 2 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 16:39, 2 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • See my comment on the photo at the Z28 review. Parsecboy (talk) 16:47, 2 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • "and reduced its speed to" - this should probably be "her" per WP:SHE4SHIPS
  • I might split off the last 3 paras as a "Later actions" or something. I'd probably also split the Barents Sea paragraph, as that's fairly long.
    • Good idea.

Parsecboy (talk) 15:40, 6 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:46, 6 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
Article looks to be good to go, nice work as usual. Parsecboy (talk) 13:17, 8 March 2018 (UTC)Reply