Talk:German submarine U-1023

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Auntieruth55 in topic comments

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Editor asked that problems be fixed during review, which is not the goal of assessment, but I did remove some duplicate refs--it is not necessary to cite every sentence to the same source, when a cluster of sentences can be cited. Problems I cannot/will not fix:

  1. coverage skimpy. When I was done with the article, I was still wondering--so what?
  2. some awkwardness-clarity issues. A total of so many tons? Is that what she weighed, or what she sank? Etc.

rated start class. Aunt Ruth (talk) 15:40, 11 June 2010 (UTC)Reply