German torpedo boat T17 has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: January 19, 2020. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:German torpedo boat T17/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:20, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
I will take this one. Comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 10:20, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
- Lead: "...the ship was transferred to France...": suggest swapping transferred for deployed. Transferred makes it sound like T17 was transferred to the French state.
- Design and description: the beam dimensions in text don't quite match the infobox.
- Modifications: "Early-war modifications were limited to": suggest amending this a little "Early-war modifications to the Type 37 boats were limited to..." to make it more explicit this discussion is in relation to the class.
- Citations: for notes 8 and 9, which Whitley is being cited?
- References: place the Whitley refs in date order?
- Nah, I go by title rather than pub date
- Image tag checks out, no dupe links, external links work.
Nice tidy article, minimal action required. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 22:24, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review; see if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:10, 19 January 2020 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 01:46, 19 January 2020 (UTC)