Talk:German torpedo boat T21/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:33, 14 September 2019 (UTC)

This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:

• first sentence, suggest T21 was one of nine...
• could you drop the 0 inches on the waterline length conversion?
• the beam measurements don't match
• which would propel the boats→which propelled the boats
• any idea where the TTs were mounted?
• In the Modifications section, if there was already a 3.7 cm gun superfiring over the main gun, how was the 2 cm gun also superfiring over it?
• "Another mount had been fitted" another quad 2 cm mount?
• "if this was actually carried out"
• "Some ships did receive an additional"
• suggest "10–12 and 13–15 October"→"10–15 October"

That's all I could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:14, 14 September 2019 (UTC)

Just a little bit of cleanup here ;-( Thanks for pointing them out to me so they won't make a reappearance.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:55, 14 September 2019 (UTC)

No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:55, 15 September 2019 (UTC)