Talk:German torpedo boat T25/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 22:43, 20 March 2019 (UTC)
This article is in great shape. A few comments from me:
- I assume the primary battery had gunshields? Perhaps add that detail?
- "which were equally unsuccessful"?
- "to help escort U-boats through the Bay" I assume this is the Bay of Biscay. At first mention, perhaps this should be in full?
- Mentioned in the lede
- same for "the Channel", although perhaps this could be mentioned earlier when she transits to Western France?
- Mentioned in the lede.
- File:German freighter burning in Bay of Biscay Dec 1943.jpg needs US PD tag
Otherwise, all good. Just placing on hold for the above minor points to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:26, 20 March 2019 (UTC)
- Fixed the tag; PD-AustraliaGov applies worldwide, just like UK crown copyright.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:23, 27 March 2019 (UTC)