Talk:German torpedo boat T29/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 17:13, 24 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 17:13, 24 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Not much to nitpick here:

  • There's a missing citation - see the tag
  • The last paragraph is a bit long - suggest splitting it somewhere (yeah, I know, that's going to be a pain to unbundle that citation at the end)
  • I think "amongst" tends to be more BrEng - "among" is more prevalent in AmEng

Parsecboy (talk) 17:36, 24 May 2019 (UTC)Reply