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Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:05, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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I will start this today! --K. Peake 08:05, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "that "Get Together" was the" → "that the song was the"
  • "It was also" → "The song was also"
  • ""Get Together" is a" → "It is a"
  • "techno and dance song which" → "techno, and dance song, which"
  • "was received with generally positive reviews by" → "received generally positive reviews from"
  • "while others found it not good enough. It reached the top ten" → "while others were underwhelmed. The song reached the top 10" per MOS:NUM
  • "the UK and Italy," → "the United Kingdom, and Italy,"
  • "the track failed to" → "the song failed to"
  • Remove the nonetheless part since that is not notable here
  • Wikilink music videos
  • "but it was animated" → "but they were animated"
  • Shouldn't you mention the one with graphical images was the first video?
  • "around their head." → "around their heads."
  • Pipe Best Dance Recording to Grammy Award for Best Dance/Electronic Recording

Background and composition

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  • "Its digital sales" → "The song's digital sales"
  • "on May 30, 2006 in the United States" → "on May 30, 2006, in the United States"
  • "was particularly fond" → "was particularly fond of"
  • "disco-funk number."" → "disco-funk number"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • Wikilink live album and add the release year
  • Audio sample looks good!
  • "techno[15] and dance[16]" → "techno,[15] and dance[16]"
  • Pipe synths to Synthesizer
  • Remove pipe on beats per minute
  • Wikilink chord progression
  • [2][17][18][20][21] is too many refs at once per WP:OVERCITE; move [17] to the end of the sentence since that mentions both songs
    I left three refs, is that OK? Alex reach me! 23:34, 9 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • "he was surprised he" → "he was surprised him"
  • "she does not care, since "all is just an illusion";" → "she does not care: "It's an illusion."" per this being the line mentioned and the appropriate place to end the sentence
  • Where is it sourced that it is suggested as being between the singer and listener?
  • Lowercase the S.O.S. Band per MOS:THEMUSIC

Critical response

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  • On the quote box, pipe Stardust to Stardust (band), wikilink "Music Sounds Better With You", Stuart Price and "Into the Groove"
  • "received generally positive responses" → "was met with generally positive responses"
  • "it was fluid in nature and called Madonna as a" → "it is fluid in nature and called Madonna a"
  • "Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine commented that the song" → "Cinquemani commented that the song"
  • The "love at first sight" comment is not directly mentioned by the source
  • "writing those lyrics would" → "writing those lyrics will"
  • "called the song's chorus" → "labeled the song's chorus"
  • "Jason Shawhan from About.com also complimented the song" → "Shawhan also complimented the song"
  • "and wonderful number."" → "and wonderful number"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "described it as" → "described the song as"
  • "in for good measure."" → "in for good measure"."
  • "was "preposterously anthemic, charging away" → "is "preposterously anthemic, charging away"
  • "Connor Morris of Cokemachineglow website wrote that the track was" → "Connor Morris of Cokemachineglow wrote that it was"
  • "According to Herald Sun," → "According to the staff of the Herald Sun,"
  • "describing it as a "huge" → "noting a "huge" to avoid overusage of "it"
  • Pipe Salon to Salon.com
  • "tacky, penny-arcade embellishments."" → "tacky, penny-arcade embellishments"."
  • "of "Get Together" sounded like" → "of "Get Together" sound like"
  • "in the background"." → "in the background."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
  • Why is flat surrounded by single speech marks when it isn't in the source?
  • Remove or replace The Chicago Maroon per WP:RSSM
  • "at the 49th Annual Grammy Awards but" → "at the 49th Annual Grammy Awards, but"

Commercial performance

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  • The Michael Paoletta sentence needs the ref invoked at the end per the usage of a quote
  • The Canadian peak is not sourced
  • "debuted at seven in" → "debuted at seven on the UK Singles Chart in" with the wikilink
  • "for shipment of 10,000 copies of the single." → "for shipments of 10,000 copies."

Music videos

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  • Img looks good!
  • Wikilink music videos
  • [65] should only be invoked after the second comma
  • "into a more of a performance" → "into more of a performance"
  • The performance tour part is not sourced
  • "Kevin Shapiro and booked" → "Kevin Shapiro, and booked"
  • "After Effects and RealFlow were" → "After Effects, and RealFlow were"
  • "the color, environment and cinematography → "the color, environment, and cinematography"
  • "and revisited the shots and eliminated" → "and revisited the shots, and eliminated"
  • "The video directed by Logan Studios premiered through VH1" → "The video, directed by Logan Studios, premiered through VH1's"
  • "dinosaurs and tidal waves flashing by" does this refer to both flashing by or them being displayed separately? If the latter, then add a comma after dinosaurs.
  • "It continues in this fluid motion" → "This fluid motion continues"

Live performances

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  • Img looks good!
  • "Star Academy, as well as during the Children in Need 2005" → "Star Academy, and the Children in Need 2005" with the pipe
  • Remove wikilink on Confessions Tour, however the song being part of it is not sourced
  • Pipe Steven Klein to Steven Klein (artist)
  • Where is the horse reins dancers part sourced?
  • "As she continued singing the music" → "As she continued singing, the music"
  • Wales Online → WalesOnline per the actual stylization
  • "around their heads."" → "around their heads"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "in Madonna's sixth live album," → "in Madonna's sixth live album" with the wikilink

Track listings and formats

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  • Pipe Jacques Lu Cont to Stuart Price
  • Remove pipe on Thin White Duke

Credits and personnel

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Charts

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Weekly charts

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Year-end charts

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  • Good

Certifications and sales

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Shouldn't you write Digital EP rather than Digital Download?

See also

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References

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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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