Talk:Get Up (Ciara song)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Adabow in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:36, 13 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • Include release date + label
Adding date, but lables are generally relegated to albums only.

Background and composition

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  • First sentence is unsourced
Added source
  • "Baz Dresinger of of Blender" - lol extra 'of'
Done
  • Link digital download and CD single
Done
  • Include label
Done
  • The performances section is a bit awkward here. Maybe create a section for it or place it in the music video section?
The reason I stuck it here is because there are not enough to warrant their own section, and music video was kind of lengthy itself, and the background/comp. was pretty short. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:55, 23 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Critical reception

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Done. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:57, 23 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Chart performance

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  • Lead and table say Platinum cert, but this section says Gold?
Done
  • Many of the charts are unreferenced in the prose
Done Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:58, 23 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Music video

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  • Link CGI like you do in lead
Done
  • "Channing Tatum and Jenna Dewan, the stars of Step Up make apperances" - comma after 'Up'
Done
  • Déjà Vu needs quote marks
Done
  • Beyonce → Beyoncé
Added [sic] template as Adaso wrote it as such. Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 17:02, 23 December 2010 (UTC)Reply
It's OK to change minor things like this per MOS:QUOTE, so I changed it. Adabow (talk · contribs) 19:42, 23 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 19:42, 23 December 2010 (UTC)Reply