Talk:Gilbert Hayton/GA1
Latest comment: 10 months ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 14:52, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 14:52, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
Prelim
edit- No duplicated links (bar DFC in the lede which is fair enough)
- Image correctly licensed
- Article is stable
- Earwig reports copyvio unlikely
Lede and infobox
edit- Useful to include what he flew prior to Defiants if we're including every aircraft after that point
- I have revised the lead a little regarding aircraft flown. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
Early life
edit- "at
theWellington Technical College"
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Link field artillery
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- "serial number" should be "service number"
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
Second World War
edit- Link scrambles
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- To avoid lots of "form": "The squadron was newly reformed for night fighting..."
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Can we give a date for flying officer promotion?
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- "Middle East" would be better called "Mediterranean"
- Done, plus a slight tweak to place the location of Malta. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Identify who Shores and Williams are, e.g. military historians
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Link sortie
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Link U-Boat
- Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Did Josling survive?
- Yes, he did, I have made this more explicit. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- Link the whole of the Gazette name
References
edit- References look good. AGF for print sources.
@Zawed: Hi, that's all I have for now. Will await replies. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:36, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe: thanks for the review, it is much appreciated. I have responded as above and my edits are here. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Zawed: Passing this article as satisfying the GA criteria. Congrats! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 15:37, 12 November 2023 (UTC)