Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Marriah Metz.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:48, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review

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I enjoyed reading your article on the gill plate trade. Your writing is clear, concise, and easy to read, which is a plus for Wikipedia users who are not familiar with more technical terms. I also enjoyed how your writing was split up into definite sections, and the introduction was well-written in that it gave a brief summary of what exactly the gill plate trade was. I would have liked for you to go more in depth as to the information in each sub-topic; it seemed as though the facts given, although informational, were only skimming the surface for the many details involving the gill plate trade. A quick fix: I believe the word "References" is misspelled when citing your sources. Overall, I think this is a great start for your Wikipedia article.