Talk:Gordon Roberts (ice hockey)/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Taylor Trescott in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 04:04, 17 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Hi Resolute, I will review this article. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 04:04, 17 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

This is short, but I think it's close to meeting the GA criteria. I have a few nitpicks to make.

  • In the infobox, delink Canada and USA (you should also spell them out) per WP:OVERLINK
  • "Roberts moved Montreal." moved to?
  • "Renowned for his stamina on the ice," I think you accidentally forgot to finish this sentence
  • The personal life section - use the full dates of his birth and death

On hold. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 23:40, 17 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

All should be addressed. Thanks for the review! Resolute 01:07, 18 December 2013 (UTC)Reply
You're very welcome; promoted. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 01:15, 18 December 2013 (UTC)Reply