Talk:Goyang International Flower Festival
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editThe article is a good start, but it still needs to be expanded and copyedited for a good grade. I have linked a Commons gallery near the bottom (with your images). What needs to be done:
- lead should mention the location (city of Goyang), and when the festival was first held (1991). In essence, you should merge the content of outline into the lead, but transform the bullet list into prose (make sure to retain the references). Citations need to be provided as requested (and explain why Effect has 0.5 million but lead states 1 million visitors?). Then you will have a very good lead.
- please format references so that they have not only the title, but also information about author/publisher. In addition to the Korean script in hangul, please provide translations in English (a reference should have both. So "한국관광공사 - 고양 꽃 박람회" should be "한국관광공사 - 고양 꽃 박람회 (Korea Tourism Goyang Flower Show). Korea Tourism Organization."
- Composition section should be rewritten into prose, and needs references
- Landmark section should be expanded, but this time, without copypaste. Please write in your own sentences.
- Please note that the final grade period is middle of next week, so try to finish this by Tuesday! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:24, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
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