Talk:Grant Morgan (American football)
Latest comment: 1 year ago by LunaEatsTuna in topic GA Review
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A fact from Grant Morgan (American football) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 3 November 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 05:10, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
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- ... that Arkansas linebacker Grant Morgan, originally a walk-on himself, signed an NIL deal with Walk-On's Bistreaux and Bar? Arkansas LB Grant Morgan signs NIL deal with Walk-On's
- ALT1:... that Grant Morgan earned two degrees and got married during his time on the Arkansas Razorbacks football team? Being a Morgan: sitting down with Grant Morgan’s wife, Sydnie and Grant Morgan Biography - Arkansas Razorbacks
Created by PCN02WPS (talk). Self-nominated at 19:37, 11 October 2021 (UTC).
- Article is new, long enough and neutral. It is sourced with inline citations. For some references, I have limited or no access. I AGF for them. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector " reports insignificant text similarities only. The hook, I prefer the original one, is well-formatted, and interesting. Its length is within limit. For the accuracy of the hook's fact, I AGF of the references (#2, #11), which I can not access. QPQ was done. Good to go by AGF. CeeGee 10:52, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:48, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
Will review later today. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 00:48, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Fun read! On hold. Over to you. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:23, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- @LunaEatsTuna Thanks for the review! I believe everything is taken care of, so it's ready for another look! PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:58, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Anytime! Looks great; definitely good enough now to pass. Congrats! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 23:19, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- @LunaEatsTuna Thanks for the review! I believe everything is taken care of, so it's ready for another look! PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:58, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
Copyvio check
editEarwig gives no concerns.
Prose
edit- The infobox says he was born in Greenwood, Arkansas, but the body says he was born in St. Louis, Missouri.
- Good catch, fixed. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- "He played college football at Arkansas" – specify the Arkansas Razorbacks for uninformed readers. Also helpful as just Razorbacks is mentioned later in the lead.
- Added. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- "Morgan, the son of" – specify Grant Morgan as first mention in the body.
- Added. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Relatedly, include his birthdate at the end of the aforementioned sentence as well.
- Added. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Wikilink letterwinner.
- Done. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Wikilink redshirting (to somewhere).
- Linked to Redshirt (college sports)
- "and a season-high eight in the last game of the season, against Missouri" – is the comma really necessary here?
- Removed. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Wikilink Penn State.
- "Morgan was named a finalist for the Burlsworth Trophy which is given to the best player in the nation who began their college career as a walk-on, alongside" reads a bit jagged, how about "Morgan was named a finalist for the Burlsworth Trophy – which is given to the best national player who began their college career as a walk-on – alongside" instead?
- Fixed as recommended. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- The citation at the end of "alongside Carlton Martial and Stetson Bennett" is unnecessary IMO as the same citation at the very end of the paragraph cites everything all together.
- Moved. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- "The trophy ceremony was held at the Crystal Bridges Museum of American Art on December 6, 2021" – the year is not necessary here as it is mentioned earlier.
- Removed. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- In § Professional career, remove the years from the last two dates.
- Done. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 14:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
Refs
editPasses spotcheck on refs 1, 2, 10, 12 and 16. Nice work. :]
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