Talk:Gray Stenborg/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 20:43, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "He shot down a Focke Wulf 190 fighter near St. Omer on 26 April, commencing a run where he shot down four aircraft in five days. He destroyed another Fw 190 the next day and on 29 April he shot down two more" - I'm a bit confused here. He shot down one on 26 April, one on 27 April, and two on 29 April. That's four in four days, not four in 5 days. Am I misinterpreting something?
- It is actually five days, I got the last date wrong. I have rephrased. Zawed (talk) 08:24, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
- "He was eventually able to bale out" - just checking to make sure that "bale" is the correct spelling for NZ English; in America it would be spelled "bail" in this context
- I confirm that bale/baled/baling out is correct NZ/British English. Zawed (talk) 08:24, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
- Sources and image licensing look fine.
Once the one bit about four in four days or five days gets worked out, this one will be good to pass. Hog Farm Talk 04:48, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
- Hog Farm, thanks for taking a gander at this one. I have responded as above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:24, 5 July 2021 (UTC)