Talk:Great American Bank

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Cwmhiraeth in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk06:39, 21 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

Created by Bagumba (talk). Self-nominated at 08:39, 14 December 2020 (UTC).Reply

Hi there! I am happy to review this nomination. My review will be posted shortly. Edge3 (talk) 01:38, 18 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
  Approved - DYK submitted on time. Article is long enough, neutral, cites its sources, and is free of copyright issues. Hook is fine and verified. QPQ checked.
As an aside, I do think you have too much bold text in your lead paragraph. I don't necessarily think you need to format all of the previous names in bold. MOS:BOLDSYN suggests that you need to do this only for "significant alternative titles". However, this feedback is outside the scope of DYK rules. Edge3 (talk) 01:59, 18 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
  •   Hi, I came by to promote this, but I find the hook rather dull. Here's an idea to attract more interest:
  • ALT1: ... that Great American Bank of San Diego changed its charter twice and its name four times over its 100-year history? Yoninah (talk) 19:22, 19 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
    Yoninah: Thanks for the input. My concern with the counts in ALT1 is that they are based on our observation of what the article has identified so far; there could be more charter and name changes that have not been identified. From the little research I did in creating this page and HomeFed Bank, these changes were quite common for US S&L's. Brings to mind the quote "Never mistake activity for achievement" ... on the bank's part, not your's ;-) I found the original hook interesting as a "first" and that it was in San Diego, not the larger Los Angeles.—Bagumba (talk) 01:28, 20 December 2020 (UTC)Reply