Talk:Great Fire of New York (1776)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:22, 18 September 2010 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be reviewing this article for possible GA status. My review should be posted within the next day or two. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:22, 18 September 2010 (UTC)

In my opinion, the article meets the GA criteria. Consider the below suggestions for potential further improvement. Nikkimaria (talk) 21:23, 18 September 2010 (UTC)

Writing and formatting

• First sentence could be split to improve readability
• "Many people believed or assumed that one or more people deliberately started the fire, for a variety of different reasons" - is there any way to reword this to be slightly less vague? I know that it's not a fact, but it can be worded more directly
• "After Lexington and Concord" - clearer to specify "Battles of Lexington and Corcord"
• "the tables were turned" - reword for tone
• "marines returning the Pearl after fighting the fire" - word missing?

Accuracy and verifiability

• Refs 19 and 22 are identical

Broad

• If more information on the aftermath is available, it should be included

Neutrality

• "Was it arson?" could be changed to "Cause" or a similar, more neutral title.

• The article talks of British occupation of New York. Surely it would be historically more accurate to say that it had been recovered from the insurrectionists/revolutionaries. and was therefore not under occupation but restored to the rightful government?

Stability

No issues noted

Images

No issues noted

Thanks for taking the time to review it! I'll get to your prose suggestions soon. Magic♪piano 23:24, 18 September 2010 (UTC)