Talk:Great Moments in Aviation/GA1

GA Review

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Great work on the article! I couldn't find any major issues with it, but here are a few comments/questions:

• Caribbean should be linked in the lead  Done
• Can you split up the lead paragraph? It's a bit long.  Done
• becoming a pilot - inspired by her – Use an emdash instead of a hyphen.  Done
• which lead the BBC to approve the film so easily – which lead the British Broadcasting Corporation (BBC) to approve the film so easily  Done

I'll put the article on hold for seven days so that you can fix this. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 13:35, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

That should be everything taken care of - many thanks for your review and comments! Frickative 16:16, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

Well done! I will pass the article now. TheLeftorium 16:19, 11 May 2009 (UTC)