Talk:Green Lantern (film)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 18:50, 9 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Issues:

  • Lede: "critics" should be "media critics"

That's pretty much it. On hold. TBrandley 18:50, 9 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

All the problems mentioned above have been fixed. If there aren't any outstanding issues, I think this one should be ready to pass. Evanh2008 (talk|contribs) 21:42, 15 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
More comments
  • "In a post-credits scene, Sinestro steals the yellow ring and places it on his finger, causing his green suit and eyes to change to yellow." merge with the other sentence
  • "Green Lantern (film)" should just have the real title in the quote box in "External links"
  • Ref. 102 is a bare reference
  • I think "Release" is way small
  • Zimbo isn't a good source
  • Don't shout in ref. titles
  • Ref. 20 should be work instead of publisher

Other than that, were good! TBrandley 03:08, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the notice! I've been a little busy for the past few days, but I'll try to get these taken care of here soon. Let's say Monday or Tuesday at the latest. Hope that's okay. Evanh2008 (talk|contribs) 04:00, 12 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Actually, on second thought I think I should be able to take care of most of these tonight. I may have to do some digging to find a replacement for the Zimbo ref, however. Evanh2008 (talk|contribs) 04:03, 12 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
That didn't take as long as I thought it would. How are we looking now? Evanh2008 (talk|contribs) 04:47, 12 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Great. It looks already; I'll pass the nomination for GA. TBrandley 01:10, 15 August 2012 (UTC)Reply