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Block Quotes
editThe block quotes in the article take a lot of space and should probably be summarized, especially since they are cited. Unless there are any objections I'll take care of it later. ZettaComposer (talk) 13:26, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
- You can ajust, correct this article. Can be this company is not so notable but from this company commenced own life the ships which already described in the articles of Wikipedia an I plussed information in that articles and one more added. Any way I understand that the article Green Star Line needs to be summurized, but due to my English I afraid to bring the article in bad condition if I will summirize it.Грищук ЮН (talk) 09:10, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- No worries, the current content and sources look really good, it just needs a little bit of tweaking to fit the encyclopedia format and tone. ZettaComposer (talk) 17:21, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- You can ajust, correct this article. Can be this company is not so notable but from this company commenced own life the ships which already described in the articles of Wikipedia an I plussed information in that articles and one more added. Any way I understand that the article Green Star Line needs to be summurized, but due to my English I afraid to bring the article in bad condition if I will summirize it.Грищук ЮН (talk) 09:10, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Any tips?
editI am considering contributing a major edit on this article but nothing strikes me as a good place to copyedit---just yet. If anyone has any particular examples so far as where to start the edit, I would be highly gratified. Tlongoria2 (talk) 18:24, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
I added a summary from what I could glean from the quotes below. I have to wonder about the notability and may nominate for deletion. Ljnyblade (talk) 22:50, 1 April 2020 (UTC)