Talk:Greenwich Savings Bank Building/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Add alt text to every image.
• "worth while" → "worthwhile" MOS:SIC
• Add a hyphen between "Corinthian style".
• Remove the comma after "Broadway facade".
• "different to that" → "different from that"
• "as hexagonal lantern" → "as a hexagonal lantern"
• "a coffered ceilings" → "coffered ceilings" or "a coffered ceiling"
• "and plaster ceiling" → "and a plaster ceiling"
• Add a hyphen between "second largest" (both times).
• "During early 1921" → "In early 1921"
• "at a cost of" → "for" (less wordy)
• "including as an auditorium" - is "as" necessary?
• "renamed the structure as" → "renamed the structure"
• "U.S. president Barack Obama" → "U.S. President Barack Obama"

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks, I have done these. Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

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