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Major Edit
editDunno if it would be classed as a major edit, but anyway I re-worded the article as previous tag at the top of the page said it was written informally and should be edited to conform more as an encyclopedic entry. So I've done that to the best of my ability, despite not being a regular viewer of ER and being a novice Wikipedian. So it'd be appreciated if an experienced user could read through the article and make any adjustments, minor edits that is needed. I started to edit this 3am UK time, so don't be surprised if there's any tense/grammar/spelling/illogical mistakes! :P I've removed the bit about Pratt meeting Chen's parents, I don't see how this is relevant to his character. I also removed these bits:
"He also briefly dated a young neighborhood activist who Pratt could relate to about the level of gang violence among black teens." "but could never forgive Charlie even after learning that his mother had forced Charlie to stay away from his family and said they could not make things right, after which Charlie dejectedly walked away." "...with the help of Hope, the religious intern...telling him he acted alone, thus saving Hope's career..." - Hope isn't mentioned in the character list of ER so I removed this bit...
Those bits didn't quite fit in while I was editing, but I thought I'd post it here in case someone wanted to re-write it into the article. I'v left the trivia section in, but to be honest it doesn't really add anything to Pratt's character. I also have one more point to make - in the info box it states that Chaz Pratt is Greg's half-brother, but when I first viewed the article, it was stated that he was a step-brother. So any clarification on this would be nice. Londonsista (talk) 06:34, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
Pratt's family
editI remember Pratt's father has a wife and a daughter, besides Pratt's half-brother Chazz, but I don't know their names. They we're seen and mentioned in the second episode in season 12. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:55, 10 October 2011 (UTC)