Talk:Grizzly Rage/GA1

GA Review

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Looks pretty good so far. I've only got a few suggestions to bring the article up to GA status:

• Need a reference for "aka Off Road" - it's not explained later in the article.
• Filmed in Winnipeg, Manitoba the film is the sixth title - needs a comma after "Manitoba".
• Featuring a cast of four, the film focuses on four teenagers - four/four is redundant; maybe "a group of teenagers"?
• heavily marked with no trespassing signs - put "no trespassing" in quotes so as to avoid the interpretation of "no signs".
• Wes freaks out - too colloquial.
• before crying about wanting to go home and dying - "wanting to go home and die"?
• Use a template to equate 1,6000 lb to kilograms.
• Use — emdashes in the {{quote}} and perhaps a colon to introduce it.
• "Sci Fi" or "Sci-Fi"? The article switches between both, so make sure it's consistent between either one or the other.

Otherwise, looks good. I'll put the article on hold for a week for you to make changes, so good luck. :) —97198 (talk) 11:42, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

• I've removed Off Road. The only place I've seen it is IMDB, and even the Canadian channel that aired it called it Grizzly Rage so guessing that's one of those IMDB errors.
• Fixed
• Fixed
• Changed to panics
• Fixed to make clearer (he cries about wanting to go home, then he dies as he finishes)
• Done :)
• Also done
• Fixed all to Sci Fi per its wiki article

Thanks :) Let me know if any more changes are needed. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 13:03, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

Okay, everything looks great to me - I'll go ahead and promote it. :) —97198 (talk) 10:17, 22 October 2008 (UTC)