Talk:Grupo Illiniza

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Jessietail in topic Confusing article

Confusing article

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The opening sentence is extremely confusing - starting with (trying to) link to itself as an "alternate name", then referring to this group as a "cultural association" - I think I understand what that's trying to say as being distinct from just "band/musical group" but it's not exactly good phrasing and made me think it was an organisation that several other musical groups were part of or something, and I'm not sure what a better way to put it would be. Much of the rest of the article is similarly odd, such as the infobox's birthday and "illiniza, Also known as illiniza". I've hidden some of the infobox stuff for now - I'm writing this here instead of trying to totally fix it myself because, well, I don't think I can do it justice with the extent of my knowledge on Andean music. --Jessietail (talk) 08:45, 28 April 2018 (UTC)Reply