Talk:Guangning County

Latest comment: 8 years ago by LlywelynII in topic Lead

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Seems like most of the current page is a well-meaning translation of some Chinese source. Unfortunately, a lot is still not-quite-English and more is full of unsourced, unexplained, and unhelpful peacocking like "developing prosperously". — LlywelynII 00:09, 28 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

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Per WP:MOS-ZH, don't repeat the Chinese in the lead sentence when it's given multiple times in the infoboxes. — LlywelynII 00:09, 28 October 2016 (UTC)Reply