Talk:Héctor Santiago-Colón

Latest comment: 18 years ago by LordAmeth in topic WP:MILHIST Assessment

WP:MILHIST Assessment

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A nice start, but needs a lot of work. Firstly, "Hector Santiago-Colon born in Salinas, Puerto Rico - soldier" is not a sentence. Please rework the introduction and expand on it; it should read something like "Hector Santiago-Colon was a US Army soldier born in Salinas, Puerto Rico. He was posthumously awarded the Medal of Honor for his service in the Vietnam War." Also, if you can find the actual text of the Medal of Honor citation, that would be wonderful. Many articles on Medal of Honor holders include this. But, overall, a nice start, with pictures and an infobox... LordAmeth 08:50, 22 October 2006 (UTC)Reply