Talk:HMS Actaeon (1778)/GA1
Latest comment: 5 months ago by HoHo3143 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:37, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:37, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- Images properly licensed
- Link launched, West Indies in the lede; add links for gun deck and keel in the infobox
- Done.
- for a repair suggest to be repaired
- Done.
- Not sure that the bits about the later ships of the class are really relevant to this ship
- Removed.
- deleted the inflation calculators
- Done.
- to peacefully occupy occupy "it"
- I believe "leaving it for the British to peacefully occupy" to be correct?
- Quite correct.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:17, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
- Nicely done
- @Sturmvogel 66: Hi, thanks for the review. Have responded above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 23:07, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe @Sturmvogel 66 I have noticed that 'Jamaica Station' in the lead is linked to a train station in New York City. I recommend fixing this with an appropriate link (I'm not fixing it myself as I am not educated on the topic) HoHo3143 (talk) 10:06, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
- @HoHo3143: Thanks for the heads up! Have fixed. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 12:24, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe thank you! HoHo3143 (talk) 08:18, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
- @HoHo3143: Thanks for the heads up! Have fixed. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 12:24, 10 March 2024 (UTC)