Talk:HMS Amphion (1911)/GA1

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 12:11, 13 April 2016 (UTC)Reply


Will review this one. Parsecboy (talk) 12:11, 13 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • Two dupe links.
  • "Tragically" is probably not NPOV
  • I might cut the link to worldwar1.co.uk - it doesn't add anything to the article, per the first bullet at WP:ELNO.

Not much to harp on, as usual. Parsecboy (talk) 12:20, 13 April 2016 (UTC)Reply