Talk:HMS B10/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 02:15, 17 September 2019 (UTC)Reply


A sub for a change! I have a few comments:

  • the launch and completed dates don't match
  • "The submarine" then "They displaced" suggest sticking to the plural in this section given they are characteristics of the class?
  • the kW conversions don't match (rounding?)
  • suggest sticking to cm or mm for the TT conversions
  • the link to Devonport needs to be re-targeted, as it is pointing at a dab page
  • same for E-class submarines
  • suggest "in May induring which"

That's all I could find. Nice job. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:25, 17 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I am nothing if not versatile! Thanks for the review, PM.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:13, 17 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by acceptably licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:00, 17 September 2019 (UTC)Reply