Talk:HMS B8/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:51, 29 September 2019 (UTC)Reply


Minor nitpicks:

  • "The boats had could dive"
  • there is a rounding issue between both the power output conversions in the infobox and body
  • even though you have linked Dardanelles campaign in the lead, you could link Dardanelles in the body
    • It's a pretty short article.
  • do we know what A-H destroyer was sighted?
    • Sadly no.
  • suggest "B8 reported spotting a periscope and a miss by a torpedo" as it appears this wasn't right?
    • Good idea.
  • you could drop the British from "British H-class submarines"

That's all I could find to quibble about, nice job. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:35, 29 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, mate.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:49, 29 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:16, 30 September 2019 (UTC)Reply