Talk:HMS Bedford (1901)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 02:54, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

This article is in good shape. I have a few comments/queries:

• what was her range?
  • Not given.
• her guns need the adj field added so they render as "6-inch" instead of "6 inches"
• do we know where the TTs were positioned? Broadside?
• the belt range in the infobox isn't covered in the body
• the infobox says turrets and barbettes were 5", but the body says 4"?
• link Ship commissioning for recommissioned?
• should 3/5s be three-fifths per WP:FRAC?
• "in the side of the boiler room"?
• "began to improve her ordered"
• suggest "items" instead of "things"
• should it be "dismissed from their ship"?
  • Ordinarily yes, but it's quoted that way in the source; a legacy of Georgian English, I expect.
• the image is PD and has an appropriate tag.

That's me done. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:24, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• • Thanks for looking this over. I think that I've addressed all of your comments, see if they suit.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:25, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
    • All good, I tweaked a couple of the convert templates. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:15, 6 August 2018 (UTC)