Talk:HMS Delight (H38)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Buggie111 (talk · contribs · count) 15:13, 2 October 2011 (UTC) Hey, I'll be checking this article out. Nice work, so far.Reply

  • Switch fo'c'sle to forecastle, it's currently a redirect
    • Cleaned up link.
  • After you finish this armada of destroyers, create their flotilla pages (won't repeat that anymore)
  • Is the English translation of the motto ("Valour delighteth in difficulties") correct? I don't believe it should be delighteth, sounds too Old English (i.e. Ye Olde Shoppe).
    • I don't know about the wording. Google comes up with something else entirely. As traditional as the RN is; it's entirely possible that it's correct.

That's about it. Buggie111 (talk) 15:13, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

Oh, also consider adding the Freya pic from the talkpage. Buggie111 (talk) 15:14, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
Good idea. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:49, 2 October 2011 (UTC)Reply