Talk:HMS Empress of India/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 12:13, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

Will take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 12:13, 27 April 2016 (UTC)

• Do dupe links, licenses check out
• You might clarify in the box that the displacement given is standard, not full load
• Seems a little odd to go back and forth between describing Empress of India's characteristics and that of the class (i.e., "her" vs. "their")
  • Yeah, I've recently been moving more to a generic description for the description to make it easier to copy over to the other ships of the class.
• Gun turrets? The Royal Sovereigns carried their guns in barbette mounts (save Hood, of course)
  • Good catch.
• Should "International Squadron" be capitalized?
  • It does refer to a specific organization, so I think it's a proper noun.
• The last paragraph of the Construction and career section needs a citation.
• "A big hole extant in her side..." - extant seems redundant here.
  • Think I've gotten all of these, see if anything doesn't suit. Thanks for reviewing this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:37, 27 April 2016 (UTC)