Talk:HMS Express (H61)

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 13:41, 26 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one too. Parsecboy (talk) 13:41, 26 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • One dupe link
  • I don't see a link for Esk
  • Might clarify that I-58 was also a submarine
  • What role did she have at Normandy? The article jumps from preparing for the invasion to sailing for refit in July.
    • See if my few extra words are clear enough to better explain her duties.
  • How is the state of the ship's hull in 2010 cited to a book published in 2004? Parsecboy (talk) 15:03, 26 July 2016 (UTC)Reply
    • Umm, time travel? Might be a bit of personal knowledge by a previous editor. I've certainly never been there to have a gander. Many thanks for catching these infelicities. I'll try to return the favo(u)rs once I'm back from vacation in a week or so.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:15, 28 July 2016 (UTC)Reply