Talk:HMS Hardy (H87)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:50, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   prose: (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. to Home Fleet. Suggest - to the Home Fleet

• Done.

2. 1937 through 1939. Suggest - 1937 through to 1939

• No, that doesn't improve it.

3. transport. Suggest - transportation

• Changed it to shipment.Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:38, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 23:50, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Nice work, Strum. Passed. Thurgate (talk) 18:48, 4 March 2011 (UTC)