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- This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Hardy (1936)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:50, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
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Comments
edit1. to Home Fleet. Suggest - to the Home Fleet
- Done.
2. 1937 through 1939. Suggest - 1937 through to 1939
- No, that doesn't improve it.
3. transport. Suggest - transportation
- Changed it to shipment.Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:38, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 23:50, 3 March 2011 (UTC)
- Nice work, Strum. Passed. Thurgate (talk) 18:48, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
Film reel
editAn interesting 1940 British propaganda film reel showing Churchill congratulating the men of HMS Hardy: [1]. --LukeSurl t c 19:17, 25 February 2014 (UTC)