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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 4, 2011. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that at one point in the Battle of Narvik, British destroyer HMS Hotspur found herself engaged in battle with five enemy destroyers? |
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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 17:09, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
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- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
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- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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Comments
edit1. but in increased to 146 in wartime. Suggest - but this was increased to 146 in wartime.
- Indeed.
2. edicts. Suggest a link for this
- Changed to policies.
3. British and Australian troops from the beaches. Is that the Greek beaches?
- Yes, just like I said earlier in the sentence
4. in June after working up. Suggest - in June after her refit
- Linked it instead.
5. ship's Hedgehog? What's the ships headhog?
- See the previous paragraph.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:31, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 17:09, 1 March 2011 (UTC)]
Nice work Strum. Passed. Thurgate (talk) 00:22, 2 March 2011 (UTC)