Talk:HMS Ramillies (1892)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 10:15, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria

Well-written:

With the comment/s below addressed, the article now satisfies the criteria for grammar, as well as layout and list incorporation. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:55, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

(a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct

(b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation

Verifiable with no original research:

The article uses a number of reputable sources, and does not appear to contain any original research. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:57, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline

(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)

(c) it contains no original research

Broad in its coverage:

The article seems to cover all encyclopedic aspects of its topic for which reliable information could be found. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:55, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic

(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style)

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

The article maintains an unbiased approach to its subject. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:54, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

The most recent revisions indicate the article had not been subjected to any edit warring for at least six years. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:44, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:

Both images used in the article are relevant to the topic, and both are public domain, so there is no fair use-related concern. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:43, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

(a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content

(b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions

@Wilhelmina Will: Hi, thanks for taking this on. Any updates on the review? Cheers, —Noswall59 (talk) 13:02, 28 April 2016 (UTC).

Yes, of course. I'll get to this one in a couple of hours. :) Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 00:01, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Comments

The article could basically be passed at this point, but first I want to check one thing: What exactly is meant by this line from the top paragraph of Service history: "She had been constructed at such a slight tilt that it took nearly an hour and a half to travel down the slips and into the water..." It's not exactly clear to me, as worded. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:59, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

@Wilhelmina Will: Okay, yes, that passage was not the clearest. Hopefully it makes more sense now. Many thanks, —Noswall59 (talk) 18:49, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks; that's much better! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:54, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

The article is passed. Congratulations! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:55, 7 May 2016 (UTC)