Talk:HMS Stag (1812)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: Hi, just a ping in case this has passed you by. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 18:18, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- Sorry for the delay. Without further ado:
- Images properly licensed
- link carronade in the infobox
- Carronade is linked at first mention in the infobox
- consider changing "After having undergone a refit" to "Having been refitted"
- Done
- Was all of the activity in the last two paragraphs in 1815?
- Added an extra date to clarify that no, that's all 1814
- That's fine, I think that I was just expecting a strict chronological account.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
- Transplanted? Perhaps "transferred" instead?
- Done
- Nicely done
- @Sturmvogel 66: Thank you! Have replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:29, 13 November 2023 (UTC)