Talk:HMS Stag (1812)/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Sturmvogel 66: Hi, just a ping in case this has passed you by. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 18:18, 2 November 2023 (UTC)Reply
Sorry for the delay. Without further ado:
  • Images properly licensed
  • link carronade in the infobox
  • Carronade is linked at first mention in the infobox
  • consider changing "After having undergone a refit" to "Having been refitted"
  • Done
  • Was all of the activity in the last two paragraphs in 1815?
  • Added an extra date to clarify that no, that's all 1814
That's fine, I think that I was just expecting a strict chronological account.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 13 November 2023 (UTC)Reply
  • Transplanted? Perhaps "transferred" instead?
  • Done
  • Nicely done