Talk:HMS Swallow (1744)/GA1

Latest comment: 26 days ago by Generalissima in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nominator: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 21:03, 5 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 13:43, 6 October 2024 (UTC)Reply


I'll try to get to this soon! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 13:43, 6 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Prose

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Very solid lede. Short, but doesn't need to be longer with a short article like this. Design, construction, and service are all written with clarity and I can't find anything that stands out as an MOS violation.

Sourcing:

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High quality sources, consistently formatted with SFNs and a bibliography. Primary sources are used sparingly and in conjunction with other sources.

Spot check

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All the Winfield 2007 cites check out. With archive.org being down, it's rather difficult to check many of these sources, but I was able to use Google Books previews to confirm the two Riley 2000 cites and Hepper 2023.

Breadth

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8 meters

Seriously though, good coverage. I'm surprised there was this much info about such an obscure ship!

Neutral

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Indeed. Seems like a fairly reasoned coverage of the ship's history.

Stable

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Yep. Nominator is the only editor, I'd sure hope so.

Imaged

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Both images are good. I would add alt-text, but that isn't a requirement. It looks like everything is shipshape here! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 21:54, 12 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

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