Talk:HOLO card

Latest comment: 3 years ago by SL93 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk00:19, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Comment: No QPQ as this is only my second DYK nomination.

Moved to mainspace by Musashi1600 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:47, 3 July 2021 (UTC).Reply

  •  Y Article is long enough (2717 characters), new enough (moved to mainspace 1 July, nominated 3 July), and article is within policy (AGF on paywalled sources)
  •  Y Hooks are short enough, interesting enough (for an article about a ticket system), in the article, and well cited. I prefer ALT2, as they're more concise
  •  Y QPQ exempt (DYKcheck says they have 0 previous DYK noms)
  •   Overall, this nomination passes, congratulations. Joseph2302 (talk) 10:21, 24 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Comment: Can we change HOLO card in the first two alts to "HOLO card on Hawaii"? or "Honolulu's HOLO card" to supply context? Victuallers (talk) 07:43, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Yes, using "Honolulu's HOLO card" would be fine. Referencing Hawaiʻi in the hook doesn't work as well since it kind of implies the card can be used outside of Oʻahu; it'd be like saying "Washington State's ORCA card" or "California's TAP card" when those cards are respectively only valid in the Seattle and Los Angeles metropolitan areas. Musashi1600 (talk) 08:40, 26 July 2021 (UTC)Reply