Talk:HSwMS Clas Fleming

GA Review

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Reviewer: Z1720 (talk · contribs) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing article. Comments will be given below. Z1720 (talk) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Prose:

• "before she was began a reconstruction that installed" This sentence needs to be reworked.
• "the first ship to be so equipped." First ship in the world, or in Sweden's navy? Clarify in the article
• " enemy coast under cover of darkness" -> enemy coast at night while the enemy's visibility would be low.
• Split the first sentence of "Background and description" to avoid a run-on
• "the beginning of World War 2 in 1939" The beginning of the article used "World War II". This should be consistent.
• I conducted some copy-editing while I read, feel free to revert if they are not helpful.

Source review:

• No concerns with the sources.
• No earwig concerns
• References are offline or in another language, so accepting as AGF

Image review:

• File:HMS Clas Fleming.jpg, File:Clas Fleming with two funnels.jpg, and File:Clas Fleming during WW2.jpg need US-pd tags.
• Per MOS:ALT suggest adding alt text

Those are my thoughts. Ping me when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 18:17, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

@Z1720: Thanks for the review; see if my changes are acceptable.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:27, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

All concerns have been resolved, so this is a pass. Congratulations. Z1720 (talk) 15:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

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