Talk:Habibi (poet)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Mike Christie in topic GA Review

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk02:56, 19 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that the poet Habibi was taken under the patronage of Aq Qoyunlu ruler Yaqub Beg after meeting him while shepherding during his childhood? Source: Sadıkoğlu, Cengiz (1996). "HABÎBÎ". İslâm Ansiklopedisi. "Sâm Mirza, Azerbaycan’ın Bergüşâd kasabasında doğan ve fakir bir ailenin çocuğu olan Habîbî’nin küçük yaşlarda çobanlık yaparken Akkoyunlu Hükümdarı Yâkub Bey’le karşılaştığını, zeki bir çocuk olduğunu anlayan sultanın onu himayesine alarak sarayında yetiştirdiğini nakleder"

Created by Golden (talk). Self-nominated at 21:06, 10 May 2022 (UTC).Reply

  •   Thanks for this interesting article. It is new enough, long enough, and well sourced. The hook checks out (source confirmed using Turkish google translate), and it within policy and written in an interesting manner. Onceinawhile (talk) 22:52, 15 May 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 02:14, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:14, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Source are reliable as far as I can determine.

  • What's the date of the artwork depicted in the infobox? It looks modern, so I'm doubtful that it can be out of copyright.
  • "(hilaf-i üslub-i şu'ara-yi zemanedür)": this is a translation of the previous phrase? Suggest putting it in a footnote if so.
  • "This can be inferred from the fact that Fuzuli wrote a mukhammas deduced from the matla of one of Habibi's own ghazals": it's OK to have the occasional unusual word linked rather than explained, but this is incomprehensible to a reader unfamiliar with the field. Can we give some parenthetical explanations?

I've copyedited a bit, rather than list minor emendations. The above are the only issues. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:26, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Mike Christie: Thank you for the review!
1) I don't know what the date for the artwork is, but it shouldn't be older than 40-50 years old, I'm not sure if it's even copyrighted as it's more like a poster standing outside on Nizami Museum's walls.
2) I'm not sure what that is as it was added by another user. I've deleted it as it seems to be out of place.
3) Done!
Let me know if there are any other issues. — Golden call me maybe? 14:23, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
I've struck two of the points. I would expect the artwork to be copyrighted, so I think the choices are to either upload it locally to en-wiki and add a fair use rationale, crediting the copyright to an unknown author, or to delete it from the article. To be honest I don't think a fair use rationale would work -- the reader doesn't gain any significant understanding from the image -- so I would recommend deleting it. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:28, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
Deleted. — Golden call me maybe? 14:30, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:34, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply