Talk:Hadong Ambush/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jackyd101 (talk) 16:46, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

A very good article that is close to passing GA once the minor problems identified below are sorted out. Regards--Jackyd101 (talk) 16:46, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

• "a successful ambush of North Korean forces." - US forces surely?
• The article suffers a bit from repetitions - e.g. "battalion" in the third paragraph of the lead, "committed" in the first paragraph of Outbreak, stream in withdrawal
• "Having fallen out of favor with the North Korean command" - South surely?
  • I have completed all of these fixes. Thank you for your review. —Ed!^(talk) 19:23, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

• Great work, article is ready for GA.--Jackyd101 (talk) 21:03, 1 April 2010 (UTC)